Everyday Blue Miracle
My nephew saw a blue angel rise
from a polished copper vase
that cradled gravely bits
of my mother. He was chanting
a poem in Hebrew as the electric
blue feathers fanned out
& flew in pieces to the upper corners
of the sanctuary. The roof opened up
& the feathery blue essence tumbled out–-
woosh–-like a speed train into the sky.
You may notice I use the word blue
but it was a blue vision, surrounded
by blue, illuminated blue & received
by blue. You could say it was a hallucination
but several attendees saw it, scraps
of blue traveling up, disappearing.
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Gorgeous imagery. Your poem evokes wonder, awe, and contemplation. Incredible!
wow!
This of course
is bluriffic
(it would have been cool
to have been an attendee
who saw The Traveling
Blue)☆☆☆☆☆
You may notice I use the word blue
I love how you brought me into the poem
Wow! Beautiful! I love “polished copper vase that cradled gravelly bits of my mother.”
Gorgeous, my favorite color, my favorite poem of lexpomo so far
Whoa! This freaks me out a little bit.
Beautiful rendition.
Amazing that you were able to organize this into an incredibly sensory poem.
Again, you amaze me.
I, too, love the tension in “cradled gravelly bits / of my mother”
Very sensory poem that made the image so memorable.
Wow, so much special about this poem: those last six building lines: “& received/by blue.” Very beautiful moment to me.
Gorgeous poem that recreates such a breathtaking moment.
This is magical, Linda!
blue is my favorite color and your poem served it well
from a polished copper vase
that cradled gravely bits
of my mother.
We can see, hear, & feel this!