Everything but the Milk
Your fourth birthday.
Sunday after church.
The three of us
alone. No money
for a party, teething baby
on my hip, a mountain
of laundry
waits at home.
But I splurge,
take you for onion rings,
the biggest slice
of chocolate cake
your baby blues
have ever seen.
Tall glass of milk
to wash it down, please.
Little brother
tucked boothside, full
of midday sleep,
you and I giggle
as we share our feast.
My happy boy, my joy,
yor smile lights my heart,
but I could cry
when the waitress
brings the check
for just a dollar
ninety-nine. She claims
her service
was awfully slow, so
everything
but the milk is free.
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I promise I know how to spell the word “your.” 🤦♀️
Oh! this is so gentle and so wonderfully and confidently revealed. Touching without being sentimental. Love it!
This makes me frown-smile ☹️
You tell this story so well here–the compression and images are really effective and that ending works so well
Fantastic, with a sorry/grateful ending. I dig you, Chelsie!
Thank you all…this one has been making my crazy…I can’t seem to get it how I really want it, but I posted it anyway. I have to say it is so nice to have people comment and make me feel like maybe it’s not a complete pile of trash!
It’s definitely not! I’ve really struggled to post pieces that I know aren’t in a finished state but our gauntlet meetups have helped with that quite a bit. I’ve really enjoyed reading your writing this year.
Thank you, Austin! It’s definitely hard to write them fast and have them feel finished. Hard to squash the perfectionism!
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Very touching, thanks for sharing!
I love the humanity, the kindness it shares. And that’s invaluable. Good title. Drew me in
Love this!