Fate Attends a Derby Party
Her life is upended
by the startling embrace
of his sidelong glance.
Within hours, they are pulled
into orbit around each other.
She is sunflare and heat.
He is prismed energy sparked
carelessly. Clear to everyone else
they are on the wrong trajectory:
edgy southern charm collides
with midwest farm town restlessness.
Romance is the flavor
she has been craving.
He offers spice
she’s never tasted,
so delicious
after the bitterness of divorce.
Foolish Pleasure
wins the Derby, becomes
their inside joke
and a sign they celebrate. Clear
to everyone else,
they’re likely to fade in the stretch.
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Wonderful, Kathleen! The equine metaphor works beautifully here.
Yes I love this poem and it’s form! Prismed energy sparked!
Clear to everyone else/they are on the wrong trajectory – yes, yes, yes. Also love the back and forth, contrapuntal-ish structure of this. Feels like the push-pull of desire and good sense.
Love it, great language, good balance between lines and sections, the back and forth between sections is the neck and neck of romance. This is a winner!