FATHER & SON, A FIRST CLIMB ON THE NEW FORT
an ekphrastic from a photo, Father & Son Venture Up,
by Michele LeNoir (me), 4.19.25
Your son, in tiny tan rain boots, jean shorts,
and white tee, stands halfway up wooden steps.
You, behind, against a clear blue sky, hands
at the ready. His grip tight to a rung,
his same blue eyes lit up. He grins,
his blonde head turned towards a new slide.
But he pauses, turns back toward you.
You, donned in soccer gear,
say, Go ahead, Bud, and he does—
up four more steps!
With each step, your proud smile grows.
Your shared joy and pride and love—
and a penance for adventure—
all clearer than any day could be.
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I keep revising this, rewriting it from scratch, but it doesn’t feel very poetic. Any and all suggestions are welcome! It’s a gift-poem for my son-in-law.
Delightful!
Thank you!
Wonderful gift-poem! Love laced all the way through!
Love how in the first stanza “tiny tan rain boots…” starts the comparison between son and father, the turn of the little boy to father is exquisite, and “Go ahead, Bud” reflects father’s belief in his son (while backing him up) to that glorious movement up four more steps.
Thank you!
Sweet, and so appropriate for a father’s day!
Thank you!
What a caring and careful portrait!
Thank you!
Thank you! I feel ready to share this with my son-in-law after all these kind comments!