Father’s Day
Flies land on raw hamburger meat,
my daughter sees before I can wave them away
says her appetite’s ruined, the heat
I explain will kill any germs, it’s too late,
her mind has hardened.
Grey tower of grill smoke
a message to the neighborhood
I’m lazy about the little things.
Garden hose left out in a looping line.
A pile of trimmed branches
from the hedge between houses
sits in the drive, a mound the dog walks up to,
pees on.
I’ve forgotten to start steaming
the asparagus and the burgers are done,
we’ll be eating in stages, one course
at a time. Daughter wants cereal,
will I go to the store and get some?
You’ve got to be kidding.
Oh, but, just look at that face,
how it mimics in certain light
the one that surprises me most,
and the one I love best.
The father-daughter dance begins:
how much damage by giving in?
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The third stanza. And the feels. “Grey tower of grill smoke” and
“how it mimics in certain light”
Yummy
The first line of this poem is a killer! I love the father’s confessions, the funny turn that happens when the daughter demands cereal and the question at the end. This one is in-the-moment, timely.
“I’ve forgotten to start steaming
the asparagus and the burgers are done,
we’ll be eating in stages, one course
at a time…”
Relatable beyond belief! I don’t think anyone in my family has ever remembered the veggies while grilling. You capture this scene well. Thanks for sharing this with us!
So much candor and truth. I smiled as a shiver filled my soul. I remember those beautiful days. Enjoy!
Precious ending.
what a dynamic poem
Dude! I have been there. It’s the kind of Father’s Day mothers will never understand. Great poem, Bill. Thanks for saying it for all us dads.
Love: Grey tower of grill smoke
a message to the neighborhood
Oh the father-daughter dance.
Was my own this sweet in little ways? Thank you for this picture.
(the heat
I explain will kill any germs, it’s too late,
her mind has hardened.)
A very Dad thing to say!
Wonderful!
Did you get the cereal?
Oh yeah.
❤️
Of course you did 🙂
Wow! I love the last stanza question–leaving us guessing, but knowing. The description of your daughter’s face is perfect. And I love the line, “I’m lazy about the little things,” which leads us along to the big thing. The father-daughter dance. Wonderful!
Love this father daughter dance!
I love this so much! The second stanza is such a mood too.
The messy love at the heart of a family!
What a sweet man you are! I’m glad you gave in. Lovely poem as well.
So love the story told here. With the mixing in of the little daily details. And, of course, the less than thrilled daughter. But with this little common understanding amid you both. Love it.