Federico spoke of the barren Orange Tree
Federico spoke of the barren Orange Tree,
“the day walks in circles around me”
He said this from the push-pinned sheet
on the wall. I saw light fall at my feet
I looked for my shadow on the ground,
like the man on the merry-go-round
caught in the loop longing for days
he hung on the stoop, dreaming
now caught in the cycle of same, less
fun in the game, no escape from
daily chants of loss and blame
without change it’s all too plain
nowhere bound with the same refrain
atop the painted Palomino, flaking paint
at full gallop, round and round, feeling faint
no one notices the languishing man
the view of colors moving blurry sand
until he steps down from the hive
alone, yet still alive
he is ready to see himself
in poverty or wealth
where
The sun will catch
the shadow of the orange tree
that bears no fruit
(After-poem, inspired by “The Song of the Barren Orange Tree”, Federico Garcia Lorca)
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A cycle that is both familiar and suffocating
Thanks for reading this and sharing your response. I am thinking about the word “suffocating” which you wrote here, and thinking it is an interesting word that I can also see describing the life not fulfilled, the painting not made, the poem not written…yes, suffocating. I appreciate your comments. thank you.
Very nicely constructed.
great rhyme scheme and it really dances out loud.
I am really loving this and was reading of lorca and oranges just yesterday……love it.
I’m so glad for your comments about this poem, and appreciate that you read it out loud. Sometimes I have to read things over and over–and out loud. Was worried it was too dense, but it seems to move, and thanks for saying “dances”. I love this particular poem by Lorca that inspired me–I have it on my studio wall–reminds me of the sanctity of being in there. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
“And you, Garcia Lorca, what were you doing among the avocados?”
And thanks you mentioning that—as I could search for those words you are referencing—and could find A supermarket in California by Allen Ginsberg . Wow. So appreciate what you said.
… maybe shopping with the “poppies” somewhere in California… ?
And thanks you mentioning that—as I could search for those words you are referencing—and could find A supermarket in California by Allen Ginsberg . Wow. So appreciate what you said.