final poem
not even close a rhythm established
keeps me fed for the year
sam harris wrote something I must address
this final poem seems the place
‘confusion and suffering may be our birthright, but wisdom and happiness are available.’
Is this not pessimism with a twist? An attempt at hope where I suspect he lives in cynicism?
the glass half empty instead of half full
or is it visa versa; I always get them confused
regardless I read on
Sam has some things to say that make me cringe think despair and despise the place he comes from to talk the way he does
and yet I am unable to stop
caused as I’ve become in this reading to challenge convictions while also-
thank you Sam-
idealize my idealism.
I’ll take that and write another poem about hope today
step into the studio the castle the gardens
praise the god of creation for whom I know not but think must be entwined in it all-
us all-
some way or another
wisdom and happiness are the birthright
confusion and suffering byproducts
of living amongst the many
getting to relate.
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your poem reminds of Dylan Thomas’s poem that ends:
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Great poem to end our journey here!