Fine China
Her body
and soul
don’t reside inside that porcelain.
Each artfully rendered rose
pales in comparison to the
shoddy red dye mingled amongst
her frizzy grays.
Every identical scalloped edge
seems too perfect next to the crags
and lumps of her elbows.
The tranquil well
is nothing compared to the
sandpaper of her face
brushing against your own.
She’s not precious.
She’s a tattered old housecoat,
hand stitched,
nicotine stained.
She’s a house slipper,
faded and worn.
She aint porcelain,
she aint gold leaf,
she aint glaze.
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I really love those last three lines and this poem as a whole. Great job.
Those last 9 lines are powerful.
“sandpaper of her face,” “house slipper”: scary powers of observations
But she is, and that makes all the difference. Well done!