Fishing
Fog clings to the yellowed pond
like breath on glass; we wear winter
coats to ward off April’s chill.
I help my son bait his hook,
swallow a soft, pink pang of guilt
over the worm’s pierced body.
Now I teach him how to cast
his line, settle into stillness,
keep his eyes on the muddied water.
It’s a practice of faith, this waiting
for sacred movement – a tug
on a string, some iridescent glimmer.
13 thoughts on "Fishing"
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This is an excellent poem, Chelsie! It’s perfectly paced and lineated. The language is gorgeous and the moment is exquisite.
This is delicate like lace. And I love how “It’s a practice of faith, this waiting/for sacred movement” captures what fishing is all about! Beautiful.
Agree with Linda and Greg, this is perfection. I like how the poem also “settles into stillness”. So well done.
Yeah, what bill said rings true for me too. The poems echos back the stillness. When the tug hits we feel it.
Beautiful piece. I love the thoughtful lines: “like breath on glass; we wear winter” is fantastic
Exquisite. I am totally grooving on your poems this year, Chelsie!
Thank you…I might have stolen the use of the word “glimmer” right out of your horse’s mouth yesterday. 🙂
snappily crafted, with a peaceful ease hiding the work – it took a second look, a double take to see the woman behind the curtain. the wizard!
Ah, I have been dying to go fishing lately. Love the simple, concise description of each step. And yes. I STILL cannot hook the worm, and wince when others do. 🙁
“it’s a practice of faith, this waiting…” I am always in love with using terms like “this waiting” almost personifying it and drawing bigger connections.
Love reading your poems. Also, your son is lucky to have you teaching him.
Lovely poem and construction.
especially love the play with “iridescent” and echo of the title
Love stanza 2 where your pink pang of guilt shines through!
Awesome! I love “we wear winter” with the line break… and the “soft, pink pang of guilt” is perfect! Yay! Great work!!