Five Lick Creek
Five Lick is a little littered
with an engine block
work pants with holey knees
white ceramic canning lids
as valuable as silver dollars.
Five Lick is where rutting deer
come for the mineral salt
amid florescent butterflies
back bend of dragonflies
minnows at the crossing rock
finches in the nettle leaf.
A narrow road (in the holler
beside this stream that runs
between our Dividing Ridge
and their Ogden Ridge) floods
when unexpected rain pours
out from fully loaded buckets.
That is when I come to clip
my beard with a hatchet
and roar in an off-key tune:
ol’ dogs halt your howlings
an’ come along my grandsons
into this flow of my desire
build your pa a funeral pyre
watch my slippery dance
my stone-to-stone prance
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Totally delightful!
your words take me home to the holler i used to live in (lick fork of jenny’s creek)… great writting!!
Energy, vigor, and “I come to clip
my beard with a hatchet…” Thank you.
Superb! Your rolling along detail takes me there!
“clip / my beard with a hatchet,” eh? The “howling” and “funeral pyre” remind me of the women wailing around Hector’s funeral pyre, even if the speaker here is howling for himself.
Id like to escape to there, and try to relive some beautiful moments and wonderful memories. Thanks Jim.
The word that comes to mind when I read this poem is lusty!