fix this
there’s a bitch in heat up the road
and i can’t keep my damned hound dog
at the damned house.
it ain’t a metaphor.
it’s a pitiful pain in the ass.
she’s whimpering and bleeding
and begging for the most primal contact
and i’m slipping through the slick weeds
to steal away her suitor.
before daybreak.
by force.
the chain link between them
don’t keep him from the scent of her
and i swear he’d break his neck
for a chance to get all tangled up again.
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A great poem about the facts of dog hood. Well done…
great poem, works for dogs and people alike, clever title
You got it figured! Stoked to get to read your work all month!
oh I talk like I got it figured, anyways. hahah. glad you enjoyed this one! and as always, thanks so much for all that you do man. you’re a poetic force to be reckoned with in this state, far as i’m concerned.
Of course it’s a metaphor–for us all.
this was primal. good job
i’ll totallllyyyy take primal as a compliment. thanks so much! i’m really glad you enjoyed it.
I love reading your poems. Growing up in Appalachia, I can visualize and relate to them all. These are the best I’ve ever read I think. For me anyway.
thank you Britt! I don’t think I could keep the backwoods out of my writing if I tried.