Fleeting
Fern shadows play over
our feet as we move along the trail.
My son pauses to raise his binoculars
every few feet calling out names of birds,
chattering excitedly about their actions.
I follow him listening, soaking in
our whispered peace, slow pace,
and pops of dappled light.
Thirteen years I’ve been his mother.
Thirteen years I’ve learned and relearned
what that means.
Just as we turn to head uphill,
wind and feathers brush my arm,
high-pitched trills surround us, and
I turn to see amazement in his eyes as
he motions me to remain silent, but
keep walking and we approach the bushes
where a handful of Kentucky Warblers
engage in an ongoing disagreement.
Bryum whispers, “They must be fighting
over a female,” as we stand on the hillside
amid darting yellow feathers
trying to follow their movements
back and forth, jostling limbs and shaking leaves.
Then, at once, they are gone.
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Love the images and references to the changes of motherhood to keep up with your son’s changes.
Beautiful, Amy. I love the way the birds flit in and out of this and the ending is sublime!
I love how you teach us a few new things while sharing such a wondrous walk through the woods with your kid. Your use of repetition serves the poem very well.
This moment is captured so well and concisely. I really enjoyed it.
The dichotomy between motherhood and birdwatching hold readers.
What lovely lines!
I follow him listening, soaking in
our whispered peace, slow pace,
and pops of dappled light.
This line evokes my childhood…feels like I have a whole other lifetime of moments like this.