Folksinger
the dinner crowd,
always loud,
paying little attention
to the folksinger
she played with
Travis picking
and sang in
her plain-spoken
way
never a paying gig,
never more than
a couple bucks
in the tip jar,
she wondered, again,
why am I here
stories of singers
in some dim Nashville
bar hitting the big time
were bullshit made up
by record companies
trying to create buzz
thumb keeping the beat,
two fingers, picking out melodies,
her voice, a counterpoint,
sweet and thin
lots of couples tonight,
leaning toward one another
over small Formica tables,
hopeful smiles on their faces
the folksinger was like
the peeling wallpaper–
a few passing glances,
but none bothered to notice
the pretty wildflowers
on the paper or
in her heart
one more song,
her favorite,
turn off the amp,
guitar in the case,
three dollars in the jar,
long walk home
16 thoughts on "Folksinger"
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Heartbreaking poem, Laura.
Thank you, Kevin. Maybe the folksinger will fare better in the sequel. In the next life.
Haunting narrative
nicely rendered,
I know this a tiny bit
through my sweet
Nashville sister-in-law,
a woman who learned
to play on her parents’
porch in Red River Gorge
You created in my mind an image of your sweet sister-in-law, pickin’ on the porch. Thank you, Jim.
Thoughtful poem. You describe the scene so well.
Thank you very much, Shaun–you are always so encouraging!
Sad, but beautiful at the same time. The scene and its characters so well rendered.
Thank you so much, Karen!
Another unique sketch in the unusual character group you have treated us to with your poems. I never imagined you could get so many rhyming titles in the beginning! btw your poem “forefinger” inspired one of mine, so thanks!
You are so very kind and encouraging, Sylvia! To know I inspired you a tiny bit brought tears to my eyes. I am very grateful to you!
Love this scene- sad but true. Brings back Billy Joel ‘s The Piano Man. Luckily he made it but many do not.
Thank you, Linda. Great connection to the Billy Joel classic!
I liked how you created and wove this scene, I can relate!
Thank you, Jess!
Gorgeous.
Thank you so much, AJ!