for Emily Dickinson
For Emily Dickinson
My 27 feet long
6 feet high windows
would have displeased her
but would not have released her
from her whim–
dressing in white
to write out of sight
of him should he visit.
But not to hide
the hummingbirds
at their feeder outside,
wings beating soundless–
their rapidity
she would say was Poetry
when such knowledge
blew off the top
of her head.
10 thoughts on "for Emily Dickinson"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I like the way you close with an allusion to one of her letters. Good move.
My late colleague Libby Oakes wrote a fine book of piems about Dickinson’s life.
https://www.amazon.com/Luminescence-All-Things-Emily/dp/1893239896?ref_=ast_author_dp_aw&th=1&psc=1&dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9.7vukfjJ-qIRW2RKr-ye3lhmAXpRYbHJko3HB1Gqb4MlM_linV5zHK5lHXW00FK6_H4mBNLPxtfna3OGlaFBNw2m1RMvbetE_Ym0iawZu8lRYtLj7ot60v023Ac8c3fWj.JkKKl3RPkZu5o03e2fkd19yrycmU392YI-u38UYZcIg&dib_tag=AUTHOR
The end is superb! I love this poem.
I love this.
Very true to Emily Dickinson. The rhyme really works. Love the ending!
I really love this poem and the ending is perfection!
Lovely tribute to ED in her own style. Well done.
love this, the rhymes and imagery are great. my mom always loved emily dickinson so i especially like this!!
This is wonderful. Thanks so much!
I love this too, especially ” would have displeased her/but would not have released her”
Beautiful language to honor Emily Dickinson and I love that you reference her love of the natural world. The first book of poetry I purchased as a teenager (with babysitting money) was a book of Emily Dickinson.