For the Neighbor’s Dog Who Watches with Interest Every Time Laverne Cuts My Hair
It’s uncomfortable at first,
having him stare, seemingly
enraptured, through the sliding
glass door, witness to my grooming
as my friend snips at the gray.
But come to think of it, I myself
have been known to stand
at hair salon windows & take in
the show, the stylists like sculptors
chiseling away at blocks of marble.
So why shouldn’t this shaggy old mutt
be allowed to appreciate Laverne’s
consummate artistry, her hands
still quick & nimble after all these years
of making me look almost good?
Maybe he yearns for her touch,
imagines her fingers flitting
through his tangled fur, taming
& trimming that unruly thicket,
the years falling to the floor.
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Yummy.
And the mention of the artist herself in poetry is delightful.
Thanks, Coleman! Nice to drop your friends’ names into poems, ain’t it?
Love it, Kevin. Our pups always seem so soulful when they sit and observe us. The years falling to the floor is a great ending line.
Thanks, Bill. Means a lot coming from a poet who knows how to stick his landings.
This a great poem
I like the idea of a haircut
as a marker of time
Thanks, Jim!
Btw I love how your comments here are themselves poems.
Very nice!
Thanks, Chelsie!
I love this imagining of dog’s desires at the end, asking us to consider a different perspective
Thanks, Shaun!
. . . and all the great conversations, all these years
Thanks darlin! We HAVE had some wide-ranging chats during these haircuts, haven’t we? A big bonus for me!
Great poem. You had me at the title. It’s like you watching the dog watching you is watching yourself.
Thanks, Mike! I figure any poem with a dog in it has a big leg up 😏
By the way, Mike, your last comment is so freaking insightful. I don’t think I consciously was doing that, but now that you say it…
Title drew me in. Appreciated the line about chiseling and honesty in the phrase “look almost good?”
Thanks, Stefan. Yes I guess I clean up ok, although there’s a point of diminishing returns 😏
What interesting musings on a subject easily overlooked.
Thanks, Nancy!
Just love this!
Thanks, Sue!
I love the way your poet’s mind observes the world. Delightful!
Thanks Jennifer! Btw thanks for coming to my booksigning!
Wonderful! “the stylists like sculptors chiseling away at blocks of marble” was my favorite image. Hope you share this with your stylist!
Thanks, Michele! My stylist, btw, is the delightful Laverne Zabielski, who also particpates in LexPoMo. Yes I shared the poem with her; she commented above.
You captured a doggy interest so well. Sometimes they watch the strangest things we do. Love how you imagine-crawled into that dog’s head. You snip away at your poems and give a pretty good poetic style cut yourself! Day to day you surprise me with your topics!
Thanks, Sylvia! This one came out almost as you see it here, although I did give it a little zhuzh 😏
Btw it was good to chat at the farmer’s market the other day.
unruly thicket killed me!!
Thanks Manny! Hope you had a nice time at the Table. Sorry I couldn’t make it.
I love the idea of doggo watching because he wants some of Laverne’s gentle care. I certainly think dogs not only recognize love and yearn to give it, they also understand when it is being give to them. Outstanding as always, Kevin!
Thanks, Laura!
for about 2/3 of this on the first readthrough, i thought/imagined you were writing through the POV of the dog… 🙂 i had the same feeling on the first readthrough of al fresco ( there i thought you were writing as a dog or a pigeon scavenger-stealing food from the plate)…it’s obvious in both that you’re a human by the end.
but i enjoyed letting my mind wander in this way for both pieces.
Thanks Dustin! I see why you might have sensed that in Al Fresco. Both pieces about desire, in the end.
You had me at dog and I wasn’t disappointed!
Oh, how I love this piece! My beloved and I have been talking about the curious and meddlesome nature of our newest 4-legged baby. We have been asking ourselves what could be going through his mind. Now I have an idea! I enjoyed this!
I love the narrative nature of this view, one watching the other watching!