Fruit of the Tree
Coleman hauls industrial-sized buckets
full of acorns from towering white oaks
that bestew the woodland acreage
that sprawls up our small mountain home.
Smooth & dull yellow, their elliptical caps
rattle as he clutches the wire handles.
We are on the late-side of the pandemic,
thank goodness, but our neighbor John
died quarantined & Joe, our good friend,
was one coughing fit away from the grave.
Recalling Coleman’s diligence, I want to recite
his name along with others, surviving & dead.
He leaches the acorns, changes the murky
water five times a day. At first it is like dark wine
then it starts to resemble weak tea & after four days
it as clear as moonshine. Using a push-down
grinder he mills the nutmeat into a coarse flour
& spoons the pancake batter on a sizzling griddle.
& spoons the pancake batter on a sizzling griddle.
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This starts out amazing.
From the very first word 😉
to the pancakes on the griddle
Great write and I really like that you are leaning eco….more trees !!!
Wonderful descriptive detail
The title recalls the bible verse: Then God said, “I give you every seed-bearing plant on the face of the whole earth and every tree that has fruit with seed in it. They will be yours for food.
Clearly, squirrels aren’t alone in enjoying the acorn. I especially love “their elliptical caps / rattle”
So many gorgeous moments here, but I love the lines: “At first it is like dark wine/then it starts to resemble weak tea & after four days/it as clear as moonshine.” Wonderful.
Clear and concise and so wonderful. Love how this ends.
Not only is this a great read, it’s instructive!
It would be cool to have a recipe-poem for a step-by-step for making acorn pancakes 😎.
I love the personal story telling!
The acorn batter as a metaphor for the renewal of life, even after times of such sadness. Well done!
Adore this. Coleman is a wonder, ain’t he? He just knows how to do hard stuff, and does it. Your poem is a great tribute to him.
I was tempted to add a verse about his homemade maple syrup but that’s another poem. He definitely a “doer.” His skills in the wild humble me.
This is a great snapshot of Coleman and your daily life together. The remembering of the pandemic makes us appreciate his ability to do this physical work all the more.
love the storytelling and detailed images of this poem.