Ganesha
Boris hates me—
the way he vacuums at 3am,
the way he thunders floor
and hammers above my head,
this my brain turns over
on the afternoon train,
and it is false to say
I am innocent it wasn’t me,
the music was loud all day.
On the day these gods first met,
Lord Shiva fought his newfound son—
two adding violence enough
to part the locks of a jungle.
The boy was defeated, his head lost
in the bargain, and Shiva’s shakti
restored him with the guise
of a wise, old, lumbering elephant
on the child’s body. And at
six foot ten Boris was a Bosnian man
never spoke words until he’d lived here
one year and said,
“What is the easiest way to Starbucks?”
We thought he was a mute.
Thus, he lunged off, swinging his arms
across the traffic in the rain
like a short-eared South Asian mammoth,
clearing a path through the trucks, determined.
23 thoughts on "Ganesha"
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love the first thee lines-
and mystery of trying to figure out
when and where this all takes place.
raises more questions instead of answers
with each read. (in a good way)
good to read your work this month!!
Thanks you d
I told you I like it, and I do!
I do not, cannot, will not believe you Kreitzman- since I could drive holes through its sentence fragments, and horridly self serving punctuation. See?! See?! I forgot to hyphenate!
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You bring together very disparate images. Love this!
If you saw this guy in real life you wouldn’t say disparate. You’d say “baby elephant walk!”
Boris is all that. I know a few Borises (Borisi?) lumbering elephants of men. And apartment living — so well imagined. “the music was loud all day!”
It actually is. Who, My Morning Jacket, Flying Burritos, Black Sabbath, Mingus
I love it that you used the spirit of Ganesh invoke this poem. Great descriptions. I love the first two lines. You are producing!
Om gam ganapataye namaha
You’ve done great work this month, Manny! Plus you’re sweet kind man. What’s not to love? See you soon.
Thank you Kevinsan
Enjoyed your poems this month – see you next year!
What do you mean next year?
Such an interesting depiction of Boris and the tension with a mysterious neighbor. I love how Boris becomes Ganesh!
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I am the pugnacious neighbor!
Out with the old, beginning the new–what better god to invoke than Ganesha?
Nobody tells stories or writes poems like you–you have a singular expression that is always a pleasure to read and pore through.
No one writes with the tightness and beauty, the catch and release of phrase, and freedom of image that you have Shaun – coming from you that is high praise indeed.
We hate Boris, his caffeine fix and his vacuum above your head!
Praise Lord Ganesh, remover of all obstacle for untwisted the Bosnian’s tongue and yours.
Keep on the path Manny. I can’t wait to dive back and catch up all your june creatures.
*untwisting