Garden Shop, a Dreamed Poem
Homey treats, knick-knacks arrayed
in the shade.
Fine, but where are
vegetables I expect to see growing
in plastic pots on tables in the patio?
The tables are there, but almost bare.
There’s only morning sun at a slant,
a squinty light I’ve seen in dreams &
childhood.
Fine, but I strike a match
and demand an accounting, lest I be
judged.
What I call a match glints like a knife
held upright as an obelisk in the dark.
I’ll notice this yesterday or tomorrow.
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Mike, do you get enough sleep?? lol These are the most interesting poems.
Fine, but I strike a match
and demand an accounting, lest I be
judged. – great lines!~
I really like how this moves, Mike. I love that “squinty light” and the transformation of the match into a knife. Very nice!
I love the magical transformation of a match becoming a blade!
This is a great conclusion:
I’ll notice this yesterday or tomorrow.
Are memories new, or are they perpetual? There’s an idea to ponder.
It reminded me of a poem I wrote about 20 years ago with the title, “Always, I will never forget.”
Thank you so much for sharing your dream!
Woah! “match glints like a knife”