Gauze
It gets better when one can’t remember
the you that you were before dementia,
winter fires set with diseased ash timber,
iced tea sipped while admiring the river,
the gardens you tended over the years,
the woman you carried one life to next,
tennis shoes flung onto telephone wires
hanging there like ghosts through the cold and wet
seasons, bottles uncorked, balls kicked and thrown,
insect bites, high school heroes, jobs, and pets,
hydrangea bushes pruned, weeds whacked, yards mown,
full-bellied moon, the Sonoran sunsets,
all the shallow wrongs you did to others,
lost in that dense fog, hope-starved, smothered.
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A beautiful write, Bill. I don’t even know this person, and yet you write this in such a way where familiarity feels right. Incredibly touching poem.
“tennis shoes flung onto telephone wires
hanging there like ghosts through the cold and wet”
This image sums up an entire era in just a moment. I love this.
Yeah I was gonna mention that line too. A whole time in one line.
I’ll highlight this none for the same reason.
“winter fires set with diseased ash timber,”
The rhyme scheme of the second stanza is pure gold.
Great writing.
That last line! The poem is gorgeous. It totally reminds me of my ex-mother-in-law.
the choice of rhyming sonnet seems a perfect medium for sieving through these memories
Such a gorgeous piece amplied by form. I love the artful turn of “full-bellied moon, the Sonoran sunsets,/all the shallow wrongs you did to others,/lost in that dense fog, hope-starved, smothered.” Shew!
What beautiful sadness here, Bill. You have found a new gear.
Very poignant and touching by careful choice of words and form.
Gorgeous.
Well drawn image: “ dementia,
winter fires set with diseased ash timber,”
Love: “ tennis shoes flung onto telephone wires
hanging there like ghosts through the cold and wet”
Evocative with a haunting beauty, Bill. Form is central here. Compact storytelling in an admirable write