Goodness
We stole the fresh spring roses for our mother
when the Highland Farmer’s Market was closing,
and there was a rush to leave as rain fell
upon the crowd. The thorns weren’t trimmed,
and I cut myself cramming a dozen flowers
in my satchel to make a proper table setting
knowing if I hadn’t tried, it wouldn’t have looked
so fine. I thought of her smiling, secretly wishing
they were carnations, but these stolen blooms
so blazed of red at dinner, she beamed with pride,
for her sons had spent the last of the lunch money
on her!
8 thoughts on "Goodness"
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stolen blooms so blazed of red… nice!
This is perfect. Love the turn at the end.
Simply ….fucking……great
This poem is many good things — thrilling, vivid, sweet, meaningful, concise, well-written…
I agree with Linda…sweetness
Thank you kindly folks 🖤
I love the turn on this as well, so smoothly done I almost didn’t catch it!
Hey, it’s the thought that counts, right? I love the tenderness of this gesture, taken at risk by the brothers.