Greeting
The sun greets me with ancient wisdom through a cracked window.
I reply with half-opened eyes and outstretched arms.
Sometimes I receive more than my share.
Sometimes I receive more than my share.
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Love the congruence between the cracked windows and eyes. Welcome back!
Thanks, Joseph! It’s so great to “see” you (with eye wide-open…hahaha).
I always appreciate your kind words.
*eyes
I like the tension set up by receiving wisdom through a cracked window. A much more original filter than bright shiny glass!
Thank you, Sylvia. Unfortunately, it’s true. The window was/is cracked. However, like anything else, it will one day be repaired. : )
So glad you enjoyed this tiny poem.
Love the concept of “ancient wisdom through a cracked window.” I’m going to use this as a prompt and write about cracked windows myself!
Oh, wow! Linda, thank you. I hope you’ll share your writing. : )
So happy that this tiny poem sparked some creative inspiration.
It’s beautiful. Sometimes less is more!
I appreciate your perspective, Linda.
I tend to write tiny poems.
Very guilty, resonates