Grooming
My granddaughters stand obediently still,
at perfect shoulder height to me, while
I blow-dry their hair. Mary first, Ella next.
Neither one of them fidgets or complains
as I draw the brush through their freshly washed,
flower-scented tangles. Such patient endurance
surprises me. Mary explains it, Well,
(two syllables) if we whine or wiggle too much,
mom just yanks harder. Ella chimes in, Yeah
and then Mary has a meltdown! I burst out
laughing. Delighted, the girls join in. So,
I take my time brushing, gently coaxing away
the knots, smoothing the unruly strands.
The noisy hairdryer keeps conversation
to a minimum, though it doesn’t really matter.
The give and take of grooming has its own
tender dialogue. End result: straight, glossy
tresses and 9-year-old approval. Hair bows
are selected by consensus, heavily relying
on Mary’s fashion sense. Hairdos complete,
exuberance freed, the girls bounce
out of the room shouting Thank you! in stereo.
The cyclone of girlish energy now spins
onward to the next area of interest. I collect
the clutter left behind, gather in the still airborne
memory, to be carefully stored away.
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I love your poems and stories.
I enjoyed this, especially that final image of “gather[ing] in the still airborne/memory…”
Love the two syllable “Well”! I can hear the voices so clearly. Such a simple loving act, but the poem has great movement. Then the stillness when the “cyclone of girlish energy” is gone on to the next thing. Such an intimate moment.
love “cyclone of girlish energy now spins”
Yes! Love the 2 syllable ‘well’ and lovely ending. Perfectly pictured!
I savored this tender moment line-by-line, and that last line is beautifully crafted. The authenticity of the dialogue mirrors the honesty of the internal landscape of the narrator. It is an honest capturing of love, joy, familiarity, with a bit of melancholy layered in.
“The give and take of grooming has its own tender dialogue.” Such a perfect line! Love this piece.
These girls are now nineteen!! I cannot believe ten years has come and gone!! This is a precious memory for me! Thank you all for your comments!
So, so beautiful. Thoughtful and tender. And then a perfect final line.