Habit(ats)
1.
On my days off, my body still wakes
at the same workaday time.
Where I’d normally hit the snooze
to capture fifteen minutes,
instead the whole day stretches blank
before me, gives me thinking hours.
2.
To my nephew a bug is a poem,
Who am I to prove him wrong?
3.
Myself, I move in poems and inches–
the leaves on the oak outside grow and die
on its branches so quick I barely notice them.
I think of the boy one human year ago,
in a different coat, and smaller.
Blink and he’ll be too big to climb.
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Shaun – What a wonderful poem. Stanza two was excellent, but I loved “Myself, I move in poems and inches–” – fantastic line! No birds, but a thoroughly enjoyable comparison of time and its participants. Time is such a strange element and one that can keep poets busy for a lifetime.
Thank you so much, Slyvia! Nostalgia and regret are one side of the time coin and it seems to be something that I’ve been going to in my writing this month. Hopefully more birds in the future. 🙂
What a great poem to wake up to.
There are as many definitions of time as there are people perceiving it and your’s catches time at the just right measure.
Thanks, Jim. I feel like the pandemic has also altered at least my perception of time. Now that I’m back in a more normal schedule, it still feels like I’m missing a year somehow.
Lovely. Give that nephew another hug.
Thanks, Kevin. I need to, unless he’s gotten to big to go through that xD
I, too, was caught by that line: “I move in poems and inches.” Signature philosopher-poet Shaun. Great title.
Thank you, Dr. Bedetti! Sometimes I wish I moved in feet or kilometers, though.
Going to join the chorus of praise for this. Moves so wonderfully from stanza to stanza.
Thank you so much, Bill.
As a meticulous carpenter and poet wanna be I especially love the line, “Myself, I move in poems and inches…”
Also “human year ago”
Thank you, Scott! The only place I’m near meticulous is in a poem, but I really admire others’ attention to detail–carpentry is a cool craft
Your writing this year is really standing out! I love this one.
Thank you so much, Linda. I haven’t been writing a lot in 2022 and it’s invigorating to write with others and have that kind of accountability.
This one took my breath away.
Thank you so much, Karen. 💛
The title caught me first, Shaun. And what a way to land this beautiful poem:
Myself, I move in poems and inches–
the leaves on the oak outside grow and die
on its branches so quick I barely notice them.
I think of the boy one human year ago,
in a different coat, and smaller.
Blink and he’ll be too big to climb.
Thank you so much, Pam.
I like the conversational tone, and the slow development looking for insight, resolution
Thank you, Pat!