haiku dump
start before the urges quit
making a mistake
not all about blood
your body will go away
to be adjusted
you will learn with man
what these pages can manage
in a cool dark place
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I vote #3.
Bullseye senryu.
love these,,.they do hang
together; make giggles when
reading in the john
These have a wonderful logic to them. It’s funny but your haiku dump feels wordy compared to the sparse erasure poems you’ve been posting. 🙂
I’m going with #2, love the ominous tone and implications of “adjusted.”.
Nice. What Bill said: #2 rocks.