Half Moon Over Midnight
She’s drawing again.
I love it when she draws
and I’ve told her as much,
though I don’t think she suspects
how deep that actually goes.
I glance over between the lines on my page
for another glimpse of her mind at work.
Every shading is a new trauma processed,
every bold line a primal rebellion.
She’s coming to grips with the fear
that the man she’s with is a monster;
thinks he owns her,
(what took you so long to get home last night?)
is easily envious,
(what’s with that compliment you just gave him, huh?)
and he keeps her creativity constantly caged.
So a spark indulged is a survivor’s step
closer to the freedoms we inalienably deserve,
a path I won’t hesitate to walk beside her
despite all the demons I still contend with.
After all, it shouldn’t sit right with anyone
that of the three of us,
the happiest, most satisfied
is also the most inhumane.
Meanwhile the curious moon above
tries to hide its face
while she adds the finishing touches
to whatever image fills her mind.
I like to think it’s a field of rye–
whether hers or mine, it doesn’t matter
when the only prayer left in me
is that I will get the chance to meet her in it.
15 thoughts on "Half Moon Over Midnight"
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to meet in moonlit rye… lovely.
Isn’t it? Thank you so much for reading!
There’s a lovely, hopeful candor in this poem that at least offsets its self-lacerating quality. I always look forward to your stuff.
And I always appreciate your comments. Thank you so much!
What a great poem. This part is my favorite:
“So a spark indulged is a survivor’s step
closer to the freedoms we inalienably deserve,”
So glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for reading!
I loved the line- he keeps her creativity constantly caged! Great feeling in this poem.
Thank you so much!
This is tightly written. It’s very good! Your narratives get my immediate attention.
I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for taking the time to read them!
Your poem is so layered, so complex. The details are amazing, and the story you weave is very compelling. Fantastic work!
Thank you so much! I’m real happy with how it turned out.
Awesome poem, Philip!
Thank you so much, Dennis!
So much to like here. Strong emotion married to the right words. Well done!