Happy Place
“Close your eyes and
think of your happy place.”
Mine ripples with the hush of oars,
where the boathouse leans
like it remembers me.
I used to skip stones off the dock
as if they’d bounce forever.
I waterskied past laughter,
played croquet with no rules,
listened across the lake
to music, classic rock.
And when I saw it again—
my heart tugged,
trying to pull me
back home.
But time drifted faster
than I could paddle.
Now, the porch belongs
to other chairs,
the lake mirrors other faces.
And though memory lets me visit—
it’s no longer mine to go.
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Brooke, this is lovely, especially —
where the boathouse leans
like it remembers me.
Please forgive me for making a suggestion, and of course feel free to utterly ignore me. Just think about this. Do you need your last two lines? You’ve already done a great job of showing. Ending with this —
Now, the porch belongs
to other chairs,
the lake mirrors other faces.
It’s beautifully expressed, poignant, and you’ve gotten your idea across so well. Just ponder it.
Thank you for this lovely poem. I too do the happy place at times.