Hellebores in Winter
The chill of an early
January morning
wrapped in frost and
layers of ice remind
her of the jagged edges of
unbearable loss as the
tears of angels roll down
her cheeks.
She realizes the darkness has
not eclipsed the promise, as
she looks out the kitchen window,
views the magenta hellebore
blooming its own defiant dance
against the cold and ice. More
mauve and white velvet blossoms
peek out of snow drifts graced
with sparkle under early morning
sun as if a child threw a handful of glitter.
The mythical knowledge these same
blooms saved the daughters of Argos
from madness with tea seeped in
petal and leaf gives her hope.
If only she planted more, she
says to herself, to take away
the sweep of winter.
The lenten rose ripe
with forgiveness, lure of the
bluebird as it perches on the
weathered grapevine wreath,
memory of the wild ponies
running along the Eastern shore.
She brushes some flecks of glitter
from her hand.
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I love the twining of season. myth, appreciation, and longing. Last two lines are beautiful! I have so enjoyed reading your work this June!!
Thank you, Sylvia. I am happy the “twining” came through. I appreciate your validation of my writing.
frost and
layers of ice remind
her of the jagged edges of
unbearable loss
Oooohhhh.
mauve and white velvet blossoms
peek out of snow drifts graced
with sparkle under early morning
sun as if a child threw a handful of glitter.
Wonderful visual detail!
The mythical knowledge these same
blooms saved the daughters of Argos
from madness with tea seeped in
petal and leaf gives her hope.
I am a “myth freak,” so this really hit home for me. (If only mental illness were so easily resolved!)
Thank you so much for sharing this poem. I love how you blend the etherial with the material.
Thanks so much. I appreciate the validation. I am happy the mythical reference hit home for you. Myths give us such great fruit for writing.
exquisite ‘s’ sound and meaning: “eclipsed the promise”
and this line sings: ” tea seeped in/petal and leaf ”
and can hear the thundering hooves: “wild ponies
running along the Eastern shore”
Thank you for the validation, Pam. It is always a good feel when the sensory comes in writing.
Beautiful with its colors! I like: “If only she planted more, she/
says to herself,/to take away/he sweep of winter.” Also, the mythological reference elevates the poem to a new elegance.
Thank you so much for the validation. I do not think I ever had a poem referenced as “new elegance” and love that.
Such admirable writing. Relatable, richly rhythmic, and consummately crafted.
“She realizes the darkness has
not eclipsed the promise, as
she looks out the kitchen window,
views the magenta hellebore
blooming its own defiant dance
against the cold and ice.”
Thank you for this offering of hope, Virginia Lee
Thank you so much for the validation. I appreciate it and understand how much hope we all need.
So many great sounds here. I love the turn in this ode: “If only she planted more, she/says to herself, to take awaythe sweep of winter….”
Thank you, Shaun. I appreciate the validation of my writing.