Her Poem
Her Poem
I am not sure
that I can write
her poem.
I have waited
in this chair
for hours,
like a cat
in tall fescue,
waiting to pounce.
I shall rise now
and go outside
to watch the hummingbirds
be chased away
from the two feeders,
except for the small female.
I imagine her as I stand
on the porch to have been
poetry the last time I saw her.
She wore a dress
bedecked with flowers,
red and purple, mostly.
I remember I said:
“You look lovely
in that dress.”
“Only lovely?”
She asked.
She caught me off guard.
I regret not telling her
she was beautiful.
I thought it best to speak
less at the time,
even though my feelings
begged me otherwise.
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Did this have a different ending? Either way, the message comes through very strong! I like the cat in tall fescue but not chasing away the hummingbirds. Enjoyable once more.
I edited it, Sylvia, after I posted it, during that fifteen minutes given us…
I love how this captures a moment with detail and emotion evoked by that detail
You describe the craft one uses to make art of words.
Lovely, beautiful, cascading poetry!
Thanks so much, Violett for find this to be cascading poetry.