Hermit
The daylight hours stretch over the gap
between the knife wound,
do you feel it,
the two sides of you
so far apart?
So far
you’re still human
delicately,
tightroping the lines
of every neuron,
every sun ray
pierced into pale skin.
The sun sinks herself into you,
you slink out of your head
into the expanse of light,
do you trust it?
In the badlands of groundlessness
you are above it all:
the hobbyless,
braindeads,
the cars like pills,
rolling away.
Task after
task after
noon
you swirl
into mania.
The dangerous hours come
without warning, knowing
you’d never heed it and settle.
Do you fear them?
Do you embrace the way it comes,
knocks you into consciousness?
You’ll start shaking after sundown
like a shark caught in the gluttony
of new death.
Whirlpooling
into some
cold-blooded
train of thought.
Do you reassess
the names you collect,
wrapped in their translucent orange
cages?
Everything is
a cage,
your skull
is always
the prime example.
The walls start answering your prayers,
because you prayed for a response,
now you’re housed in some
god’s mouth, do you gatekeep
every secret you found?
Do the thoughts grow
and calcify around you
until they’re big enough
to live inside?
Push away every
dial tone,
sunshine child,
fish gasping
at the hit of
oxygen.
Become the last of your kind,
like a mantis eating the others,
undiscovered but do you care?
Do you care to exist at all?
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I read this twice: the first time, trying to pick some favorite lines to compliment, and the second time, because the first wasn’t enough to appreciate the poem. All the lines are gorgeous and visceral. Absolutely well done.
Absolutely agree with Maira!
But my favorites
“ fish gasping
at the hit of
oxygen.
Become the last of your kind,
like a mantis eating the others,”
“Everything is a cage, your skull is a prime example” <3
I like the use of repetition as rhetorical questions adding to the sense of uncertainty and unease. And “everything is a cage your skull is a prime example” is a fire line!