Hollow
Saw the old man sitting there by the ocean, wearing his angry red cape
& his floppy hat. I said, Are you sad that time is passing, that sky
ignores you & ocean still ripples with joy on sunless days?
He did not reply—he no longer had a mouth. But I saw the birds
flit around the cage that his torso had become, heard their
rustling, wings wide open against their metal hills.
Those hills rang blandly, but deer still came up to him to beg food,
robins hopped around his flat shoes looking for worms,
squirrels rifled in the surrounding shrubs.
Are you empty? I asked. Sand shifted, grass crackled
in a dry wind, & gulls shrieked an answer.
Old man remained faceless, headless,
hollow.
~inspired by Magritte’s “The Therapist”
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Haunting & surreal, as one would expect from a poem inspired by Magritte.
Yes, his work is so eerie sometimes. Thanks, Nancy!
Sorry, my autocorrect changed your name. I should have just addressed you as “Kevin,” not as Mr. Nance. My bad.
I do enjoy this–the swirl of images and the mood.
Thank you, Roberta!
I really enjoyed this poem, gorgeous lines!
Thank you, Shaun!
Lush, dense and engaging, Taunja!
Thanks!
The old man transcends your landscape in this.
That was the goal–thank you!
Taunja, you really embodied that painting. I didn’t look it up until I read your poem. I especially loved your haunting lines “he no longer had a mouth” and “& gulls shrieked an answer.”
Really liked the form of your stanzas–each line diminishing in length. It seemed to me to echo the gradual disappearing of this figure in the scene.
I’d been looking every day for a poem of yours, and was so glad to see 2 to read today. Great start!
Wow. Thank you, Karen! I love reading your poems, too.