House Renovation
Renovation of a house is a kind of rocky romance
the love affair promises, the trust breaks up and the
disappointing sub-contractors woo but fail to consistently deliver
Scrawled over-budgeted promises ~ bids never staying true to quote,
as insturance companies give every excuse not to pay
not to mention tolerating intrusive nosy neighbors
The painter filled the house with oil pain miasama as scratchy
religious programming blasted in Spanish on his paint-speckled
battery operated radio
This old house has such good bone structure
a smiling wrap around porch and the echo of wicker chairs rocking
as long gone elders’ laughter lingers in the air . . .
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Your poem brings back vivid memories of a house friends, family, and I renovated.
And yes to:
good bone structure
a smiling wrap around porch and the echo of wicker chairs rocking
as long gone elders’ laughter lingers in the air . . .
Pam, thank you for your commentary on my poem, yes, vivid memories of caregiving and renovating and ushering loved ones home. Happy Summer enjoy!