Howl (An American Sentence)
**Inspired by Pam Campbell’s American Sentence obsession!**
Fire alarms the coyotes’ siren deep in the ravine
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**Inspired by Pam Campbell’s American Sentence obsession!**
Fire alarms the coyotes’ siren deep in the ravine
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Perfect.
Gives me shivers!
Brilliant title !!!!
and the alarm and the coyotes
another …….echoes on echoes on echoes…….
This is actually kinda brilliant
Well, thank you! I adjusted it again to get the syllable count exact.
Listen: fire alarms the coyotes’ siren deep in the ravine.
I adore this! Really paints a picture.
Love the update:
Listen: fire alarms the coyotes’ siren deep in the ravine.
I liked what dimension the adjustment added.
You are still 1 syllable short for the pure American Sentence. No worries but curious how it would deepen even more if you made another adjustment 🙂