Hyperlocal
zoom down
if you will
to the morning garden
to the gooseberry patch
3 bent figures
gloved hands taut
pull thorn & spire
hear tart globes plop
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zoom down
if you will
to the morning garden
to the gooseberry patch
3 bent figures
gloved hands taut
pull thorn & spire
hear tart globes plop
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There is a lot of music in these lines. Love, “hear tart globes plop”
agree with Maggie Rue about the sounds. last line especially makes me hungry for those gooseberries
yes!!
the sounds
of how
a thing in
a hand can
feel.
Very nice – reminds me my gooseberries are about ready to pick!
The poetic drone has landed in the gooseberry patch!
I like this so much. It’s fun to look at. Images like this are the same ones that make people want to pay to “pick your own blackberries.” You should post on youtube.
I walked right through your day experience….loved it!
I even got to tasting the product!
The thorn and the plop – I feel it and I hear it!