I Don’t Know What Is In Your Heart
but it’s Saturday and we’re
here showing ours: broke, tonguethick. Our husk betrays
how close to the surface the tears
may catch in our throats. Outside is stormcloud,
the light, its gloaming from orange to gray.
Life can hardly be free from fear,
from want, from death. And there’s no answer
why. We always knew this.
So,
hungry, together, we suck on butterscotch
and sip Diet Pepsi–each thinking
our own thoughts, each trying.
The sky could burst
at any time.
And across the street, the clouds
bruise, and the train pulls on
behind the treeline, calls
“Woe– woe–” and we listen
like we haven’t heard it all before.
18 thoughts on "I Don’t Know What Is In Your Heart"
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Love this, Shaun. Killer ending!
Thank you, Pauletta Hansel 🙂
Lovely poem. I especially like the idea of clouds bruising. Thanks!
No, thank you, Nancy Jentsch! 🙂
Shaun – Great poem. I like the tension in here. Also the word “tonguethick.” Can I borrow it?
Thank you, and feel free to use it, Sylvia Ahrens!
I’m a fan of the skillful linking of concrete particulars with universals!
Thank you for your compliment and insight, and taking the time to read it!
lovely, haunting
Thank you, Liz Prather!
You capture the tension between these two people. The line “The sky could burst at any time” gutted me.
Thank you for your kind words, Lisa
I love the third verse with its butterscotch and diet Pepsi and I wonder if I don’t catch just a bit of the same kind of fatigue I feel as our community effort pulls at every word hidden in our creative juices this summer.
I also love the untied structure.
Thank you, K. Bruce Florence. I’m feeling some fatigue too–but having fun trying new techniques too 🙂
…tonguethick…our husk…suck on butterscotch…clouds bruise
So much to wake me up in this poem. Thank you.
Seriously, thank you, Rona Roberts!
“And there’s no answer why. We always knew this.” Love that bit. Powerful poem.
Thanks so much, Madison Miller. I’m glad you liked it.