I Have Become a Denatured Thing
and I think, How easy it is to forget
the animal of us–
flying by hillscapes at 60 miles an hour
in machines we built
from machines we built.
From the safety of right here, we watch
the world turn like a lock
in a key. We see it, wait
for it all to open for us.
How easy it is to own
our feelings. Like borders,
like possession, it is as temporary
as day and night. All we have
are stories, each other, this world of brown and blue,
and its temporary greening. It’s so beautiful,
in theory, that all of it is our own. We forget
we all deserve its space, so we treat it like it’s ours
alone, this life we share.
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“in machines we built from machines . . .’
Oh how true, and it seems they bottle us like fresh ketchup.
I agree with that. And there are some people who don’t mind to be bottled by it.
All of this.. My heart is so heavy with you.
Thanks, Madison Miller. Solidarity. 🙂
I’m learning how to use enjambment from your last couple of lines.
Thank you for your kind comment. I’m trying to figure it out too, and experimenting. 🙂
My favorite lines:
All we have
are stories, each other, this world of brown and blue,
and its temporary greening. It’s so beautiful,
Thank you!
Thank you, Melva Sue Priddy! 🙂
“the world turn like a lock / in a key.” What an evocative image. The sound of being locked in, and at the same time opening up.
I like the brevity, and the suggestion in “Like borders, / like possession.” They’re muted, but powerful words.
And I want to scream YES to these lines:
“All we have
are stories, each other, this world of brown and blue,
and its temporary greening.”
Thank you for your generous comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it.