I have two feeders
I have two feeders,
filled with Hummingbird
nectar–red,
to attract birds
with wings
that would appear
to be impossible
to lift a heavy body.
Two hummingbirds
dart in from opposite trees,
hover near the feeders.
The larger male
keeps watch over his
chosen feeder,
aggressive,
attacking other birds.
In his actions,
I take the young female
to be his favorite
of the other four
or five birds that
dart in and out,
for he.
never routs her.
Watching the two birds
this morning, I remember
the two origami hummingbirds
a young student made for me,
one large and one small.
On red paper, she wrote:
Don’t forget me.
I go inside and find the three momentos.
I frame them
with this poem
and hang them on the wall
to share
with every guest
who gets up,
walks across the room
and reads the words.
Most of them will ask
about the young lady.
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I love all the stories flittering about in this poem✨
Amy, I like your response to this poem and its stories. Thanks…
1. I also was bird watching this morning.
2. I really like your connection of experience, symbolism, and meaning.
That makes two bird watchers, one reader with insight and one writer who hopes to attract readers.
I like the feeder that offers poems as social exchange, kind of like the ancient Chinese and Japanese poets
A feeder, offering social exchange like the ancient Chinese and Japanese poets. You have put me in a revered group. Thank you…
an answer to the request not to be forgotten. You have drawn a lovely picture of this student for us and we only have the barest of words, but it is there.
You are correct, this was an answer to a request, and I am please to say that the student is presented in the barest of words.