I Love
I love
The cling of the chimes
The soft and gentle breezes
The smell of newly mown hay
The eternal rhythm of the seas
The eternal rhythm of the seas
The lustre on the new fallen snow
The promise of better tomorrows
The love that goes and comes around
The pitter patter of rain upon the roofs
The feel of cultivated dirt under my feet
The pitter patter of rain upon the roofs
The feel of cultivated dirt under my feet
The power of the thunder and lightening
The beautiful feet that bring “Good News”
The soft whispers of “love you for being you”
The squish of the earth after the fullness of rain
Oh Lord, I love you!
Oh yes I do,
No other will do!
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Amen.
Love your concrete poem, Mari! As usual, you give us a couple of ways to interpret. Is this love true or is it a clanging bell?
Are the words back-up by action or are they just words…….. to be determined!
A great concrete poem… Powerful message…