I Meant to Come in Peace
I didn’t mean to cause so much trouble
coming into the world; there was already
trouble enough, what with the Arizona
just settling itself into reddened water, and
Anne Frank, there in the dark Amsterdam night,
wearing her yellow star.
It was a hard time, but I came anyway.
To hear my mother tell it, you’d think
the whole bloody war was being waged
right there in her blessed uterus; she always said
I took forever getting here,
and it hurt like hell.
Maybe because I was born in war time,
maybe because I felt bad about causing Mama
all that trouble, I’ve spent a lot of my life
seeking peace, which sometimes meant
making peace, or—the hardest—
keeping peace—and yet
here I am, seeing
all these decades,
all these wars,
wondering sometimes
about intention, about
elusion….
14 thoughts on "I Meant to Come in Peace"
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I love this- the search for peace, and the knowing that it was not the child who caused any of the problems
Leah, thank you! And in a bit of fortuitous synchronicity, I had just commented on the poem you posted today when I came upon this!
That first stanza is terrific!
Thank you, Kevin!
I like the last stanza so much.
We wonder about those things we cannot know.
Thank you Carole! I do think that the poem should end with “wondering”–so I will leave off the last 2.5 lines in the future. It’s more open-ended that way, and I think it should be. Thanks again for the encouragement!
Beautiful poem. Love “the Arizona/just settling itself into reddened water,”
Thank you, Shaun!
I love this poem. Still after all these years there’s questions.
Thank you, Linda! When you have a chance, take a look at what I said in my reply to Carole about ending with the word “wondering.” I think that would be better but would value your opinion, too.
I liked your idea of ending with wondering! Beautiful poem.
Thank you, Linda! I appreciate the feedback about the ending, and I’m glad you like the overall poem, too!
A very thoughtful piem. The second stanza made me laugh.
Thanks, Tom. Yeah, I can get a bit snarky when I start writing about “Mama”!