I remember Kenosha
after a summer dinner with friends, stopping for gas on the high ground while the sun was nearing the horizon and the storm roiled closer from the northwest. Perfect for driving, no blinding light at eye level, the imagination-startling, incredibly textured multi-grays of the clouds in place of endlessly featureless blue. Maybe you recall the photograph I sent you of the view from the pump, how much you said you loved me for sharing. I hope fantastic vistas force you to think of me for a sharpened moment among the dulling, infinite years of no longer needing me.
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Ouch! This poem, everything that follows “maybe you recall the photograph…” hits so hard, even though my story is opposite. I received the photograph and she didn’t know it’s significance and that…hurt. A sweet pain in retrospect. Thank you so much for this poem.
Thanks, Philip!
This goes in an unexpected direction.
From gas pump photo of sunset to the hopeless hope of loss. It does what a poem should
Thanks, Jim. Always nice to hear when I get it right.
stopping for gas on the high ground while the sun was nearing the horizon and the storm roiled closer from the northwest.
Maybe you recall the photograph…
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