Last Night I Dreamed of Nashville
Maybe it was the city dreaming me.
In the dugout basement
of a torn down house
an armadillo sized bat
lumbered toward me.
of a torn down house
an armadillo sized bat
lumbered toward me.
The bat feigned attack
then tried to back away.
First instinct flashed
lightning fast hands
to the short hot neck
for a quick breaking.
for a quick breaking.
A given soft underbelly
and the limp exposed
body spoke volumes.
A well known tongue
of timeless trustings.
I released her then
into the basement
of our Lexington home
and she smoothed herself
into a painted glyph
and closed her eyes.
and the limp exposed
body spoke volumes.
A well known tongue
of timeless trustings.
I released her then
into the basement
of our Lexington home
and she smoothed herself
into a painted glyph
and closed her eyes.
Mine had been opened
to a beautiful dream.
to a beautiful dream.
It lives still, as do we, as does hope.
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Gorgeous. And the line “A well known tongue / of timeless trustings” is my favorite of gauntlet so far,
you must have had a lot of mosquitos… in your dreem.
<3
Hope as a bat! That’s an original metaphor. This poem is haunting.
Exquisite, although the thought of touching a bat is not my favorite thing. I can say without caveat however that your basement drawings are a masterpiece. Did you miss your calling? Are you fact a great visual artist, hidden in plain sight?
she smoothed herself into a painted glyph!
“Maybe it was the city dreaming me.” Wow! Wonderful poem. The last stanza also stopped me–love the hopeful last thought.
The opening stanza tension got me right off the bat! (See what I did there?) Love the visceral quality here.
I like this journey from fear and conflict to understanding and hope.
Yes!
she smoothed herself
into a painted glyph
and closed her eyes.