I See You
The staff have moved herself
from the I.C.U. to Emergency Care.
She can’t talk just yet.
Soft smiles, ask for her birthday
every time someone brings the food.
This morning she has walked
for the first time since the stroke
and writes thoughts down now.
they always ask her birthday
when it’s time for pills.
Today, nurses coached her
to look at things in the room
and name what items she can.
The glow in the room ignites
as she invents new words
for all the pieces of her world.
A window is a bye-bye
her plate of food, yum.
Folded clothes on a chair
is good business.
Doctors smile and nod,
Linda nods too, she knows
these are the correct words.
Think about it, wow, she’s right.
When the therapists are done
they are smiling, point at me,
“and who is he?”
She has trouble with my name,
she won’t get it right.
And then, as if she hadn’t just
learned how to move her arm;
flips a casual hand my way,
oh, that’s everything. I melt.
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🥹 beautiful moment. The build up to the sweet reveal makes it so satisfying.
Coleman is everything. Dude – that’s beautiful.
everything
is just write
in this day lily
(of a poem)
Unbelievably dear, this is. Thanks for this, and for taking care of our sweet Linda so very well.
This is a beautiful piece, a testimony to the care you have for each other.
Coleman I love this so much it gave me chills. How beautiful.
The ending of this poem is beautiful, such a touching moment!
What an ending! Just beautiful and real. And I thought “Folded clothes on a chair / is good business.” is awesome.
Beautiful, authentic, and rich with love and humor that is so apparent between you and your Linda.
Yes to:
flips a casual hand my way,
oh, that’s everything. I melt.
I’m in love with this. If it’s very much rooted in reality, I’m really sorry that you’re experiencing this or have experienced it, but, the fact that through it all, we still find a way to love, even when life tries to take it from us, those are the memories that won’t go away. Those are why we keep going.
I love this!