I start a geography
that
soothes
by unspooling words: I
mouth an incantation
to
dissolve on my tongue,
breathy
meaning
that
spills
over you.
I hoard
names
and language, an allegiance
extended to
stories I
construct
with
what I knew of
an
arbor,
lying in bed at night,
gauging the hollow
of time by the
hum
in the room.
~ An erasure of pages 10-11 of Lia Purpura’s book of essays, Rough Likeness
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So interesting! I wasn’t sure what an erasure was until I looked it up, so thank you for introducing me to this form! It’s impressive how you’ve taken someone else’s words away to reveal the poem beneath, like a sculptor.
Thank you!
Sigh. How can I hope ever to write one of these half as good as yours?
Thanks, Kevin. They’re only as good as the source I borrow it from. Keep that in mind. But I find it fun to write them.
Oh wow! I was gonna note my favorite but yeah….this.
Wow! ” I start a geography that ”
by thresholding the title you launched us into the spaces and collecting lyrics like unripe wet grapes in a strange greenhouse mist.
Karen, incredible.
Thank you so much, Coleman. I always wonder if these are going to make sense to people. Sometimes they’re quite the leap, but that’s why I like writing them.
I love the first-person speaker’s voice that comes through so strongly here. Great poem, Karen.
Thank you, Nancy!
I love how you “unspool” this beauty, Karen, from title to end.
Thank you, Pam!
Gauging the hollow of time by the hum in the room is marvelous.
Erasure poems are such a revelation at times. This one is right on time.
Thank you, Rosemarie!
Karen, you are a master of this genre! Teach me the ways.
“to
dissolve on my tongue,
breathy
meaning
that
spills
over you.”
Thank you.
If you were to put together a book of erasures, this feels like a title poem, a centerpiece or an Ars Poetica. It speaks to your skill and to the act of erasure.
Thank you, Shaun!
I really like this poem, and you constructed the look of it to match so exquisitely.
Thank you!
Lovely structure, lovely sounds. And the ending makes me so happy.