I Want So Terribly To Feel
If I knew where to find
a door into unknown
tranquil spaces filled with light
to feed on the silence and wonder
the quiet green ravines
the blue sea lapping them
The trees are heavy with it
such volume of glorious sounds
rhythm and space
voices in an unknown tongue:
We are still here
You are one of us
~ Cento of lines taken from Hundreds and Thousands, The Journals of Emily Carr, p. 22, 23, 24, 26, 27, 28, 21, 36, 37, 40, 42
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well done! although i can no longer think of ‘hundreds and thousands’ without hearing ‘billions and billions’ going off in my head….
Thanks!
I REALLY like this. Tone, imagery, movement. “tranquil spaces filled with light/to feed on the silence and wonder.”
Thank you!
Beautiful – both visually and aurally!
Thank you, Donelle!
Thank you, Nancy!
Love this poem. The ending feels like a warm embrace.
Thank you, Donelle!