Ice Cream Wars
(a Countdown poem)
In 1944 when you were eight,
Carmen Miranda started a war
with her face, of which you told me
you licked, on the inside lid
(before ice cream melted
off the Dixie cup).
Such a sweet place;
Ice Cream Wars,
Jersey.
Pow!
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very nice- on the inside lid.
I really liked this, especially “Carmen Miranda started a war/with her face”
Nice to here your voice Amy. Old Washington wordsmiths miss and love you.
Favorite lines:
Carmen Miranda started a war
with her face
Remarkable poem. The sweetness of ice cream war during the awfulness of WWII and the setting in one word: Jersey. & lastly, Pow! (wow)
Yes! Nostalgic and punchy