Iceland
Long due honeymoon, we walk black sand beach,
stand at the crisp ledge of a waterfall
and watch greedy-fingered gravity reach
up and grab the current, like taffy pulled
over and down, ride the native ponies
with their tousled eighties rock band hairdos.
We three. My past heartache accompanies
whale watching, hiking, in the bedroom, too.
Bathed in the spray from a blowhole geyser
I opt for the now and strip myself bare,
stow the past inside my soul’s deep freezer,
vow a present life, just we two, aware.
Oh, I’ve kept an old slicker for rough days,
when your weather towards me is cold and gray.
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Greedy-fingered taffy pulling the waterfall over and down and the ’80s rock band ponies…perfect, awesome images! Great poem.
Incredible images. I just love those last two lines.
Your best of LexPoMo, Bill. Vivid, nostalgic, even sensual at times. Do I detect remembrance here as well?
Love: greedy-fingered gravity
tousled eighties rock band
and ahhh, yes;
Oh, I’ve kept an old slicker for rough days,
when your weather towards me is cold and gray.
I laughed at greedy-fingered gravity, and the couplet hit me from left field in the best way. Great sonnet dude.
So much to enjoy, but I love “greedy-fingered gravity,” “the current, like taffy pulled”
From form function, from function form. Bill, stellar.
The stanza break from one to two kills. This is so good!!!
A favorite gets bumped and this one installed. Full stop.
This is awesome
Wow! Emotion-filled and imagery-packed. “My past heartache accompanies . . .” tugged on my heart— and then you go to the “now” and then– wham again!