If We
Stonecrop clings like starfish,
pink and spotted on the rock, and I
still cling to peppy illusion. I don’t
think I’m alone in my hope
that if we hold out
our stardust arms,
stretch our starry palms,
maybe we
can turn the tide,
wear razor cliffs
down to a shine.
Call me naïve,
but what’s that quote?
The one from Margaret Meade?
Never doubt
that small a group of committed
suckers
can change the world.
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You had me from the very first line! Excellent.
Thank you so much, Kevin! I see from your bio that you have a poetry collection coming out soon. I look forward to reading it!
In love with “stonecrop clings like starfish.” The lineation is wonderful as well
Thank you so much, River!
Love “wear the razor cliffs down to a shine.” So visceral! MM quote is wonderful.
Thank you so much, Bill! I hope the shift to the word “suckers” in the MM quote made people think of starfish suckers, but I’m not sure if it worked.
Great poem! It’s optimistic and pessimistic at the same time. How did you do that?
Thank you! And I suppose I am both optimistic and pessimistic, so that’s probably how that came together.
This. This. Great work.
Thank you, Sue!
Love “our starry palms” so much!
Thank you, Shaun!
Thank you, Sue!