If You Yearn
“If you have a deep scar, that is a door, if you have an old, old story, that is a door. If you love…If you yearn…that is a door.”
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“If you have a deep scar, that is a door, if you have an old, old story, that is a door. If you love…If you yearn…that is a door.”
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to breezemaking!
the marriage of
window and door.
<3
This is clear, simple and elegant. Well done!
Love this!
Yes
simplicity brings us home
in poetry
and life
be here now!
Dang, Coleman, what a phrasemaker you’ve become!
It’s funny about this lexpomo thing.
I didn’t know I was gonna end up working a series but now I have 5 of these tanka acrostics with the epigraphs. Might have to try and build it.
Go for it!
The breathing is key.
Relax into the deep sea.
Ease into release.
I like the heightened internal andd end rhyme in the second stanza
Stunning!
I love these. My favorite moment must be “Nature’s seed awakening.”
All ways become one. — no truer words said. just perfect.
Plant Trees is also a good message.
Love:
Every doorway is empty.
Simplicity brings us home.