i’m living {carried and traveled}
And the rain demands attention
with sweet and narrow pain
it pleads to be remembered
by something other than its name
I’m living I’ve lived
It cries to anyone it comes across
striking fear in new drivers
and ant colonies
And as a girl sitting safely
stowed away
I watch and think I can hear
cries of retribution
from the thunderous clouds
that gave so much of themselves
[carried and traveled]
only to become synonymous with
trouble
As the summer presses on
the sun, relentless as it’s been
has gotten its much deserved break
and the garden,
as nature often does,
only wanted what it needed
I don’t think it makes much difference
to it, if it came from
the garden hose or sky
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This is a very interesting poem. I like the way it ends with the garden not caring if what it needs comes from the garden hose or sky. Good work!
I love how you listen in to nature here. Lovely line, “And as a girl sitting safely / stowed away . . .” Clever how you titled this piece and repeat those words!