I’m living in the in-between land
where the text on my screen
is in white
on white
and the work’s
humming in the back of the brain.
Tomorrow’s poem bubbles
on that proverbial burner there,
just beyond the memories,
just around the hesitation
just before the sleep clears
and the dream slips slips slips into that crust
around the eyes before I wipe it away.
The lecture series to fashion
haunts my spine in that place
where my dad’s voice warns
when did you get the assignmenti
and when will you begin?
and how long do you have to write this?
Yeah, dad—
I’m working.
Even though I napped today
and scrolled today
and pumped some iron today
and watched the clouds today
over the Sandias
and went to sit
in the box-chapel
where the blue blue blue sky
slants above the face in the icon
where silence lives in his almond eyes.
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Interesting! That third strophe is really strong.
Would you consider flipping your first and second strophes? That second strophe grabs with the first 2 lines. I think that’s where your poem pulls the reader into your message. Just a thought.
Thanks, you’ve helped in my revision of this poem.
I loved following your thoughts here. The escape of one’s thought-of poem seems to be quite a LexPoMo theme this year!
Agree with Nancy, re the escape of one’s thought-of-poem being the LexPoMo theme this year. You take me there so well in your poem!
Love this one, and the feeling of having work humming in the back of the brain and tomorrow’s poem bubbling on the burner is probably what we all feel in June!
on the other side of words is silence
I can feel the liminality, so well done. The second section especially feels so real.