Imagined Menagerie
I swallow a piece of rough crust bread
it sticks in the straits of my chest
blocked maybe by the whale
in my belly’s deep seas.
The bellowing beast’s song
sends gazelles running
to the hills of my knees.
A bear charges down
my shins’ snowy slopes
down to the crocodiles of my feet
plodding through the grass.
The bread wears down to a stone
and passes to churning waves.
The whale was there before I was born.
Bats perch on the wires of my nerves.
Watch and you may see them
fly out from this cave
in the front of my face.
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I love this!!! Such rich images.
Straits of my chest
the whale in my belly’s deep seas
bellowing beast’s songs
hills of my knees
A bear charges down my snowy slopes
crocodiles of my feet (I never noticed you wear crocs)
and OMG -bats perch on the wires of my nerves
I will never look at you without seeing your menagerie.
An imaginative poem. I followed the whole journey. Some subtle alliteration too. Good job!.
Love the stanza break and the second is schemed really nice.
And the last 4 lines!
This one built like vomit and then projectiles. ( in a good way :-))
Coleman, thank you! This is the first time I’ve gotten projectile vomiting as a compliment, but I’ll take it! 🙂
Highest of, sir. Compliments to the chef ….I really really like this one:-)
Ooh this really engaged me. Excellent descriptions!
I enjoyed this imaginative poem, Bill!
Egads! Coleman is right! Bill the descriptions were ticklish. I could feel the creatures in my body. As always you get mucho applause for verse that engages and entertains and ensnares me.
The puzzle of a line: The whale was there before I was born. You were predestined to hurl this bread. To spew it forth into a poem. Formed into a bolus for us to praise.
Wow, what creative and effective ways you found to describe how anxiousness feels in a body!
Creatures in the body. Wow. A great poem.
I enjoyed how you weaved seemingly disparate things together. Nice writing, Bill.